Excerpt from Light to my Darkness

Dear Soul mate,
It's been years since I saw you. You came out of nowhere back into my life. I never in a million years would of thought that I made such an impact in your life as much as you had in mines. We grew up together and causing all kinds of commotion back home in the streets. You have awaken something in me back two and a half years ago and I haven't been the same since then. All I do is think of you even when other guys talk to me. I can't even see myself in another guy's eyes. When they talk to me, it's you I am thinking of and wish it was you that was here instead. I have been yearning for your touch and you come visit me in my dreams every night. I am in love with you and it makes me so crazy because your totally across the other world far far away from me. Please understand that we so belong together. That my mind have you in places that I would never of dreamed of with another. Your kiss melts my heart and have me quivering for more and your touch makes my heart flutter. No one could ever do that now or back than except for you, my love. I cry to be close to you again and again. I find only restless nights and memories of your every kiss and touch. How you react to me drives me insane with wanting you. I truly am in love with you from infancy and we were always good together. I love your hazel eyes how it looks into my soul and you know the real me. No one ever could get that close to me. I wouldn't let anyone get that close. I have search the world to find something and it may have been you that I have been looking for. Every corner I am hoping that you are there. I have wanted along time to be with you..... Come to me, my love.....
Yours truly,

This is an excerpt from my novel that I am writing.... Not a for sure thing but I would love any of your opinions please.
TO BE CONTINUED...................